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Thursday, November 20, 2008

Death Sentence Soundtrack

If Death Sentence had a soundtrack or if i had to make a soundtrack i would think of a Pop and Metal kinda of a mix of both genres or a Rap. Those types f soundtracks would be a good choice because it involves guns and shootings, and deaths. But for the deaths that happen in the story it should be this jazzy type. The story also takes place in churches so it should have this choir song playing in the background to get that feeling when someones in church. And the Pop, Metal to get the feeling of gangs and guns in with a little rap in it to get the feeling going as well.

Wednesday, November 19, 2008

Rewrite

They dismissed Paco from the interrogation room and sent him into a general jail population . His cell mate was a mid 20 year old Hispanic man with tanish white skin covered in tattoos. He eyed Paco with greedy eyes. His name was Ortega Hose" Que paso hombre?I saw you on thee T.V , me hear you killed Big Pete. It true you killed him?"
"They are trying to blame me for a murder i didn't commit," Paco replied eagerly. "Can you be mi amigo porfavor?" Paco's voice sounded hopeless .
Hose already feeling sympathy for Paco asked ," What did you lawyer say hombre?Is your lawyer gonna cut you a deal?"
"Lawyer, estas loco hombre , i don't have any money. Lawyers are for thee rich people. Yo soy no mas Que un pobre paesano."
" Hombre you don't need to be rich to have a lawyer."
" really? de verda !!How do i get one?"
" Mi amigo, this is America every one here get appointed an attorney,that's how deals are made But before we go on did you really kill ol' Big Pete? Said Hose with a very curios tone.
Paco replied with all his eart" no hombre you gotta believe me i didn't do i t."

Wednesday, November 12, 2008

Setting

Death Sentence take place mainly in Arizona, but once in a while they say El Salvador. Paco( the main character) is being framed for a crime he didn't do. When the television station get a free tip saying he hid a gun in bushes located next to his door,police then examines the gun and says that the gun is the murder weapon. When the police went to arrest Paco panicked and runs from them. So far in the story Paco is running from the police and is traveling to the southern part of Arizona and headed Toward Casa Grande.

Would i like to be in the setting? No i would because , the setting is mostly taking place in southern Phoenix. Southern Phoenix is the place where violence, gangs, drugs and shootings are really at. Deaths and murders are really actually located in Southern Arizona , but i know i would want to be involved in those things.

Monday, November 10, 2008

Characters and background

One of the main characters on Death Sentence is :
Paco, a young Salvadoreno who cam in to America for work . Paco, crossed the border illegally and is in Phoenix. While traveling from Tucson Paco meets a man ,by the name of Juan. While on the bus Juan tells Paco, he's been to pison in Texas. Juan asked Paco of he needed work, Juan knew someone Paco, can work for and offered it to Paco. Paco wanting work took the job. Paco, worked for a man named Big Pete. The job that Paco was required to do and payed 100 dollars a week was to pull cars apart, but not just any cars, these cars were stolen and sold for parts. Juan then gathered, two of his friends,Rollo and Louis to steal money from Big Pete. In the middle of the night Juan is woken up with a gun to his faced pulled into a car, dropped off someplace given $60.