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Wednesday, November 19, 2008

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They dismissed Paco from the interrogation room and sent him into a general jail population . His cell mate was a mid 20 year old Hispanic man with tanish white skin covered in tattoos. He eyed Paco with greedy eyes. His name was Ortega Hose" Que paso hombre?I saw you on thee T.V , me hear you killed Big Pete. It true you killed him?"
"They are trying to blame me for a murder i didn't commit," Paco replied eagerly. "Can you be mi amigo porfavor?" Paco's voice sounded hopeless .
Hose already feeling sympathy for Paco asked ," What did you lawyer say hombre?Is your lawyer gonna cut you a deal?"
"Lawyer, estas loco hombre , i don't have any money. Lawyers are for thee rich people. Yo soy no mas Que un pobre paesano."
" Hombre you don't need to be rich to have a lawyer."
" really? de verda !!How do i get one?"
" Mi amigo, this is America every one here get appointed an attorney,that's how deals are made But before we go on did you really kill ol' Big Pete? Said Hose with a very curios tone.
Paco replied with all his eart" no hombre you gotta believe me i didn't do i t."

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